UPDATING readability

From: Matteo Riondato <rionda_at_gufi.org>
Date: Sat, 16 Oct 2004 10:53:12 +0200
Could we change an entry from:

20041007:
        One of the syscalls the 1:1 threading library libthr uses has
        changed, thus breaking ABI compatibility. Make sure you 	rebuild
this library with the kernel.

to:

20041007:
        One of the syscalls used by the 1:1 threading library libthr 
	has changed, thus breaking ABI compatibility. Make sure you 	rebuild
this library with the kernel.

?
I think this will improve the readability and the comprension of the
entry by the non-native english speakers.
Best Regards
-- 
Rionda aka Matteo Riondato
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Received on Sat Oct 16 2004 - 06:53:15 UTC

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